I agree in Daniels story that hope is more important then bread.
Because if you have hope you will stay alive.And if you have bread you might not stay alive. They stayed alive because they listened to Erik villain and the radio and they new when the deportations were and when D-day was.
Nice work Grant. You need to work on expanding on your thoughts. An example would be in your paragraph you said that hope keeps you alive. You need to explain how hope keeps you alive.
ReplyDeleteYes in know i have to work on that.
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